Sunday, January 20, 2008

attempt #2

well, i tried making the cards with my name on the front and they ended up looking very squished and unprofessional. so this time i added my name to the back along with my motto, 'sit back and relax'. i also added the swirl from the lemon, to emphasize the brand.

i do like the outcome, but there are still a few changes to consider. i plan on moving the phrase over towards the right so that there is less interference with the back of the ribbon. that will also allow me to move the ribbon higher on the front of the card. lastly, i will add ellipses to the end of the phrase.



note: for some reason my trusty digital camera is not taking pictures that truly represent the back of the business card. the yellow is so light, it is just barely noticeable, and even though in the pictures you can see how (sadly) pixelated the graphic is, in person the yellow is so light, there is no way to even tell.

8 comments:

Miss Petunia said...

These are absolutely darling!

Kara DeFrias said...

Darling, indeed! :-)

Angel said...

Ooh, I like the back. One thought though...what if you tried using a smaller, rectangular hole punch. I bet it would eliminate that open hole space.

rebekah @ elizabeth anne designs said...

Love them!

mzb said...

well, i retooled the card and moved the phrase on the back so that it doesn't get in the way of the back of the bow...but i am intrigued by the smaller, rectangular hole punch you speak of, since i have only been able to find larger ones that are more obtrusive

Geggie said...

Love them!

Angel said...

I'll send a pic. :)

SRH said...

I really, really like the new and improved cards. I LOVE the swirl on the back as well as the sit back and relax. I am still showing off my old business card though.